Kids in this school had powers and most of all had developed and found out what these were but poor jay left tagging behind his, class after class he pushed himself to talk to others and made great friends. But this was not enough.
The opportunity of a superhero power competition struck as a great thing for jay to do but his power was not yet there..will we ever fun out if Jay achives
his goals?
• from day one he'd been unable to fit in with the other students.
•but then one day a great opportunity sprung amongst his, a superhero competition for the most unique power going, but jay had no clue what his was yet.
• the goal in which is for jay to learn that he has the ability to make things mystical come to life and was able to breach the future of time. And to become stronger bit by bit, this was a great overcome for him.
• the conflict would be for jay himself to over come his fears of not being able to talk to people using his power because everyone would love for magic to come to life, his unique power made him better and stronger then others and he was able to achieve more friends then ever before in his life.
I think your story is good. I like the fact that it gives of a sense of mystery about his power which you don't see that often. I also like the opportunity that arises, a superhero competition.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good story. I like the idea of a competition and it can have many different outcomes.
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